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This is my 1º official flash submited to newgrounds, my speciality is music, but, i want to try flash :P, dont be harsh, its my 1º one, so please, let it pass, ok ?? :D
It wasnt very good. The voices were hard to hear. It was very short. Maybe Fix the voices and repost so people can hear them. It wasnt complete crap just a little rough. Polish 'er up a bit. 3/10
lol i know your getting this a lot but...
i kow your gettng this a lot but sorry it sucked stick to music your ok at that this waswell blah
I'm sorry, but this is terrible.
1. This makes NO sense. Maybe you should include a summary or overview in your comment?
2. The second guy is very difficult to even understand. His voice is too deep and not projected very well.
3. You can't even read the credits that well. Use lighter text, or a lighter background.
Even taking into account that being your first flash, it was pretty bad. I don't wanna sound like a jerk, though. I couldn't really tell what they were saying, but what I caught every now and then wasn't funny at all. The music was okay, but not fitting the animation really. Also, the people were okay-looking. So basically, make the dialogue longer, louder, and more funny.
Its preety good but it dosent relly make sence.
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