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Thre Short Super Mario Bros Screw Ups and Adventures. VERY SHORT!

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meh

random and reppetative make it longer with more jokes and less random violence and if you do do random violence make it funnier but keep trying



Originality lacks

I am sorry about giving you a low score, but there is really nothing else I could give you. The idea is unoriginal and the the flash is not very good. You did not put in any sound effects so the video was very difficult to watch because of all the emptiness created from the lack of sounds. The visual aspect of there being to different Mario games put together as one does not work and Mario's feet don't even tough the ground most of the time. The jokes were not very original in ideas and the jokes got old very quickly. Maybe if you can really put down a brain storm session along with some hard work you could make a good video. You need work before posting again. The pity one plus 2/10.



Good, but

Add a play again button.
It should be the 8-bit Mario because you have the 8-bit backround.



A decent attempt, I guess.

Why did you choose to use two conflicting art styles? The newer GBA/DS Mario from Superstar Saga really looks awkward in straight 2D Mario Bros. scenery.

I would've also appreciated a bit more variety in the humor. Three jokes about him being crushed by falling walls could've been better executed as a single joke with some other crazy "Screw Ups and Adventures."

I gave you the 5 in the hope this gets protected for your effort, but don't feel too disheartened if this does end up blammed.

Keep working!


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The plot was the worst bit.

EVERYONE HAS DONE MOVIES LIKE THIS AND THEY HAVE BEEN BLAMBED FOR A GOOD REASON!

You need to spend more than 2 minutes thinking of a plot, the jokes weren't funny, the animation lacked effort. The only good thing I noticed about your animation is that you got the jist of sprite animation, so you can put that towards something. But if you're not gonna do something with a unique plot, at least do it with some uniques drawing style or animation (No ANIME is NOT unique)


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