The characters were so jumpy. its like they were all on crack. every half a second they would bounce up and down, it was very annoying, but besides that the animation was ok. the art was pretty average. i didnt like the way that the hair was drawn. way too flat, and the way you drew the woman was awful. the sound was really poor quality, but i dont blame you for that, just get a new microphone. but you seem to be pretty new to flash, so im gonna be easier on you with the rating.