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i know this flash is not very good but i'm working on a spiratural sequal and i just want to know what people think good and bad... i know the ending is week i know the gun looks funny i just want some REVIEWS!!!
update: MUSIC CHANGED!!!
Sorry, but it wasn't very good.
The music was irritating and it didn't loop well, there was no sound effects when the guy shot his gun, there seemed to be no real storyline or plot, and the graphics weren't all that great.
Some of the animation was alright though such as the bird flying. (it looked good for someone who is new to using flash)
Well, practice more on flash. Don't give up because you will improve over time. 2/10 for now.
i actually have been flashing for about 1 year off and on (in the last year there were three months were i had the trial and now i own flash) the next looks and sounds much better its also much longer with a better plot and GOOD MUSIC!!!
I actually quite liked it, the animation was smooth the graphics were fairly detailed. just a good flash. But seriously kill that music, right now.
ok everyone i iwll change the muzic ! it isn't as anoying when the loop dosn't stop like that... it dosn't when i just watch the .swf on my computerbut i will get a better loop
the animation wasn't bad at all but the audio loop was really irritating! Put some song or something on it... Rock or Hard rock 8P
Good start. keep on truckin'!
Ughh... That music, that music! Turn it off!
(Or atleast atempt to have a smoother loop next time)
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