Fix the voices.
The voices weren't really in sync. But other than that, it was okay. Could've been a little better.
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i hope you enjoy it ^_^
Anyway, the characters have no names. Just something I drew up after watching too much LF and several other flashes. 7_0
Script by me. the guy was voiced by me, the girl was voiced by big bad boner (aka lindsay). I've had flash for years but this is the first I've submitted. My mic is broken so I really couldn't help the bad quality voices and I also made the movie medium quality on purpose to make it look less "flashy".
THIS WAS SLAPPED TOGETHER OUT OF BOREDOM. (literally a week)
you can contact me by aim (hintoflemmons) for questions or anything :D
*is ashamed for making this e_e*
ZOMGWTFBBQ
Motherfucker *BLEEP*
Fix that, nao.
LOVED IT!
I just loved this! The characters expressions are simple but that has a charm in itself, and I personally think that the fact that the voices was in the same tone all the time is what made this movie so great! You have awesome talent, just slight improvement on some of the art and better lip sync and you'd end up on my favourite artists list! Great work!
Haw Pawcket!
i laughed so hard when i saw the hot pocket guy. the only flaws i see with this movie is, well i think you could of put a bit more emotion into your characters voice at certain points of the movie. I liked this tho, so Good Job :)
hey.....
drawings are good, voices are bad, storyline horrible.
How to improve?
1º Mouth movement after the voice stop, correct that.
2º While talking be more "electric" and make sure you don't breath to the microphone... (always saying this >. >)
3º Get a true storyline
4º Add a nice looking menu to your movies.