A very promising series...
Checked out the first one as well but this review is just in general. Now of course the animation it self isn't like a full blown scene made in the Unreal engine...but it does fit the bill for this if you just want to make a good series =) From what I can gather, this could be a very interesting series. I'm very intrigued by these two episode. It's kind of something that you would see out of book that focuses on good story line. I could see this as being a Newgrounds hit. It definitely has the potential! Keep going with it.
I know it's hard to produce at regular intervals...but definitely look for volunteers to help! Unfortunately I can't do anything. I lost my interesting in producing my own animations long ago and I don't have the experience nor the time to produce things like backgrounds. Good luck though! I'm not that active on here but I'll definitely keep my eye on this series!
I've already gotten a few requests from some good people but if anyone thinks they can help at all, I hope they don't hesitate to contact me! I'll do my best to produce regularly :). Thanks for watching!
I just watched the 1st one, and now this one... This looks like this could get pretty deep into story. Only reason why I gave it a 9/10, is music, yeah it was there, faint, and I think you could of chosen a more I dunno... kind of music to it.. Other than that. NICE WORK!.
Well the music and animation is pretty good and the story looks promissing, but the storyline just ags on too long. People need some action in these to keep their attention. This is the second episode and there has yet to be any action untill the last part of this 1. I can see that this series can be promising, but you have to keep peoples attention dude. Its like trying to grow a fruit tree without letting it have water. If you want to have a successful series you need to give it some action. Im hoping the next episode will have more action. Another thing is the title. You need to have an early reference to the title in a series. If som1 sees a video with the title "capture The Flag" they want to see somthing that has to do With CTF!!!! They shouldn't have to wait 3 episodes till they see something that has to do something with the title. Other than that its pretty good. Sorry for the 6, maybe your next will get a 10.
Well I understand people need some action but Evan almost gets decapitated by a ladder, he gets a bottle thrown at him and a horrible fate befalls him at the end. This may not quench the average Newgrounder's needs but it's something different and there's about a gazillion action flashes. The action will come though, and it will be well warranted :). As for the title, were you not listening during the observatory scene? Anyway, thanks for watching.
To bopmofo: I hate people like you who don't watch the beginning before watching something else. Its misleading because you haven't watched the first one, idiot.
Anyways good job, certainly very different. I can't say I was too into it when the first came out, but the plot is very different and this one is even better. Its not just some mindless fighting and someone betraying another, in fact there was no fights at all. ITs amazing you were able to keep me and others watching with all talks.
I'm glad it kept you entertained throughout :). Episode 3 will be have probably just as much talking but will be spaced out with some significant events.
Huge improvement over last episode, keep up the good work. Good graphics and great storyline. I'll look out for the next one. I hope you get help like you wanted. The use of music was excellent also.
Thanks a lot for watching! Hope you like part 3 :)