Amazing intro. But the animation wasn't so good, and very short as well.
Author Comments
Hey, here it is, as I promised! I promised to upload it before 2008, and I did. There may be a lot of unfixed sounds and crappy details, but I will fix it soon, I just needed to upload it before 2008. This episode includes the beginning of the fight against the banana's and the apples.
As you can hear, I am using microsoft Sam. That's because I'm norwegian and my english isn't very good. If you want to voice-act in some of my films, send a PM ;)
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Some parts of this were fantastic, others not so much. But this is really good, and you can see how much better you're getting! The only thing I'd suggest is that you be careful to keep the style consistant. Things were changing between shots like the size of the apple, which mess with the continuity of the movie.
Assios responds:
Thanks for your review and suggestion, TheBoogley! ;)
Nice stuff
But the sounds are just terrible. The voice of microsoft Sam is scratching my ears. Graphs are quite good but not best. You should do this again with better sounds and graphics. The story was interesting so I'll give you 3/10
Assios responds:
Yes, I'll quit using Microsoft Sam. Thanks for your review.
Needs work
WEll, the concept wasn't terrible, but it could have been executed a little better. using Microsoft Sam for your voice acting wasn't the best choice (personally I think it's annoying whenanyone does it, but that's me) Get yourself a cheap mic and record it again with a friend. you'd be surprised how mucha little sound editing can do!
As for the animation... you're on the right track for a comedy and It isn't bad. I love mafia stories and I'd like to see what you do with the next one!
Keep it up!
Assios responds:
Thanks for your review. Glad you liked the story, and I'll stop using Microsoft Sam ;)
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4.28 / 5.00
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- Dec 31, 2007
- 9:45 PM EST
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- Comedy - Parody