great movie

I thought this was a very funny movie, i laughed pretty hard!

Quite Funny

Simple but pretty good. But loads of work that could be done to develop in future. I hadn't seen the advert before but i could definitely get the jist of what was happening.

One thing i definitely would point out is the <scream> - if you're going to do it, commit to it and SHOUT! Nothing says weakness like a half-attempted scream. Find somewhere where the neighbours won't hear and record some soundbites, then scale the noise down - it'll be 3 times funnier and flip that score a notch.

Second bit, look for the opportunities for extra detail - e.g. the shark could have grabbed his head and shook him around a bit like a ragdoll. The stickman in my mind didn't need to be beautifully drawn (and i thought it did the job fine in close-ups), but the animation can't freeze in any one spot! Something always needs to be happening, e.g. clouds, seagulls, water, etc. Lastly the sound was a little muffled - not a huge point but something that could easily be touched up.

Not bad by any means, Keep it up!

Cool

Cool, idea, even if the art sucks, its really funny

critic

nice idea - crappy animation...
Try to draw real humans.

Lol

Lol, that was a funny spoof of the commercial, although the artwork wasn't that great.