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Conditions2: Consequences

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Thanks for the second frontpage Tom!

The second installment of the series "Conditions".

PLEASE WATCH EPISODE 1 BEFORE WATCHING THIS.
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A criminal took Red (Member of the Police Department using "The device") his wife as a hostage.
In exchange for his wife, he wants Red's device.

But Red can't release the device because of the conditions (His adrenaline level is too high).

Stay tuned for further episodes!

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I liked the first one better.

It was okay, But if I was that guy I would rip that other guys head off, but yeah, he was to stupid to do that. (the policeman was the stupid one.) All and All it was good.



Again, weak story, weak acting.

Why didn't the cop just take the gun out of the criminal's hand? Why didn't he just change it into a spoon? Why didn't he just stop the bullet? Why didn't he just lift the criminal off the ground? Why didn't he just kill the criminal by rearranging his atoms?
MASSIVE PLOT HOLES.
You could've at least been a little interesting with the story and made it be about the corrupting influence of the glove. Oppressive state and all that. But you had to go with the whole: "cop loses everything then goes on a rampage". Please try to be a little more innovative in the next episode.


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DJJ-asshole responds:

About the gun thingy, I guess you're right, but it's a matter of time before he shoots his wife.

And I can guarantee that the next episode will be better.


Good job

This was good, but the dramatic parts were just a little bit too cheesey. You seemed to jump into the story line with the druggie too. Also, you made the officer seem too emotionally weak. He gave in a little... Too easy. Just some things I notices, but the rest,all good.



wow

Good story line very good graphics. i have to say way better then the first. you are a good flash creator and i hope to see more in the future. the glove wepon you made up in your mind is brilliant. you have a good mind for making flashes.



Wow

Again,Nice job!


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