BlueJedi54
it was cool, but cood use some artistic vision
Author Comments
This is based of my first flash (which sucked) like alot but now its looks better and with music hope it gets in
jetfusion responds:
like how put in a background? make them more interactive??
like he said!! *below*
it was kinda cool and u actualy put in more effort then most people!!!
but slow down the speech bubles, not everyone read that fast, and really practaice ur drawing im pretty sure u can do better then that. nice job!
jetfusion responds:
ok i will slow down the text in what part was it the breifing??
Not bad.
Not that bad at all. There is room for improvement, however. The drawing could use work.
jetfusion responds:
what you don't like my ball that smiled the entire thing lol
