Again, you have some ability,
but there is not much to this. Newgrounds is full of little introductions, tasters, pilots, tests, whatever and Tom tells us NOT to submit them here. Don't get a bad reputation, take your time now and make something complete and to the best of your ability.
As I say in my Art Tut its better to do your writing in TEXT, rather than handwritten, its just so much easier to write, to edit and to read. Don't worry about writing in french, but it would be better if you provided subtitles in english as well.
drawings wer good and effects were to, but the animation was shite
Please put it in ENGLISH
Where's the English...
Blah, darn French. *shakes fist* Anyways, the drawing was decent, although at some times it looked a bit eh. The animation wasn't too smooth, felt too forced in and a bit slow compared to the relative actions of the stick figures. It would be nice if this had some English translation. This Flash was too short. It would be nice if there was at least some action involved. I hope your next Flash has more than just an introduction.