Again, you have some ability,
but there is not much to this. Newgrounds is full of little introductions, tasters, pilots, tests, whatever and Tom tells us NOT to submit them here. Don't get a bad reputation, take your time now and make something complete and to the best of your ability.
As I say in my Art Tut its better to do your writing in TEXT, rather than handwritten, its just so much easier to write, to edit and to read. Don't worry about writing in french, but it would be better if you provided subtitles in english as well.