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^^Good Points^^
Well, if you look beyond the graphics, it has pretty much what every movie on NG has. Decent humor and an odd storyline, but still kind of interesting. The ending was kind of weird, but random and funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was no audio in the actual movie. If you don't have much graphical capability with this program you use, at least put in some good sound effects and music.

Random, but fun

A nice little animation, weird but good.

The graphics weren't great, but I suppose the way they were is exactly the way you meant them to be, which is good.

The sound was pretty much nonexistent, except for the end.

The story was good, nice and random, a good job. Would've liked to see some voice acting but still was a good movie :D

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Well... No

Sorry, but not really humorous and the only thing i liked is the idea of using the names as a person (I dunno if it's even your idea), but still i think a really bad one, and another problem you should put in mind, No audio...

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Alright

Well I have to say this wasn't too good, the animation of the sun could be much better and the background seems very lacking as well as much of it just seeming to be very random. Nothing seems to fit very well and the whole plot is kind of eh, could work on the story a little and the backgrounds.

I don't see too much wrong with having text as characters if that's what you want to go for but the other graphics could be improved a little. It would also be nice to hear some music or some form of sound all through the flash and maybe improve the way the text is presented.

1/5

<3

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crazy fun

I havent seen this kind of flash before.It was really cool though as well as fast!