Lol
That was well animated and sort of funny for a short also the sounds were a tad echoey but that's just me.
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calls to check on his wife, but the servant answers, what is happens next is the stuff.
Voices are provided by Ryan Carell, check him out at http://mrat.newgrounds.co m/
Not Bad
Well It Was Pretty Good The Blood Was A Little Sketchy And The Way You Positioned Him On The Hammock Was Strange But Over All Pretty Good
toonan, i'll remember that name
i found it rather funny. the concept was great, meaning you have the creativity to make good flashes. movies with watchable stories. it actually made me laugh. as well your animation did have a bit of that retro feel to it, witch is something i personally like. my main negitive feedback comes in the area of the animation, and the voices. the voice acting was annoying in many places, because it was that high pitched thing. as well with the animatin i found that certain areas needed to be worked on. on both of your characters the shoulder that should have been behind the chest was in front of it. as well the lines were wavy in places, and i saw a fill/paint brush area had kind of leaked onto the hammock. other than that i found the movie enjoyable.
best of luck, great idea
- the mega god-
toonan responds:
Right on !! i know i've rushed through few places. I appreciate your feedback.
And thanks to others too for watching.
funny
funny, i liked the story
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The ending was pretty funny, graphics were good but the voice of that guy on vacation was not good understandable (for me).
Also: The hotel room is really well animated. Nice 3D style