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smoking kills (short)

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Uploaded
Dec 20, 2007 | 11:26 PM EST

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i hate smokn so much i decide make a flash movie about it,
and or you can replay it lol,

remember thesong is very long, well , about 4 mins, so enjoy it lol.

very rare on the market dunno why,

please enjoy :P

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lewis1994lewis1994

Rated 5 / 5 stars

love it !!!!!

i love it liam the best thing about it is the drawing of the man


05AshallL responds:

lol thnx but thats nothing i well rushed it lol


ottermaniacottermaniac

Rated 2 / 5 stars

hmm

Depends what you're smoking. Weed just makes you skitzophrenic and lags your brain. Tobacco does more damage :P


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PhobotechPhobotech

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Lord help us all...

...Beware of mass-shifting disgruntled joints, leaning over on our youth, causing their craniums to melt like jelly...a very common problem in today's society I heard.

...It would've probably been better for your case if
A) You had audio OTHER than the ridiculously long track to a short, short, SHORT-SHORT flash.
B) You had a longer, more complex flash
or C) You GRASPED the audience;

...Allow me to elaborate...

...Your scenario: Enter joint...crazy ass irrelevant techno song FINALLY finishes loading (learn to edit, crop, and splice audio files in the future.) Gangsta kid walks up to joint, obviously with the intent to indulge. Said joint expands to the kids equivilant size, leans over, destroys kid. Tag message, and you then have the option of replaying something with a 15 second run-time, or let's jam to the song that took the majority of our loading time.

What would have been better is if you GRASPED us with your message...you could've approached this in several ways; You could've used humor, tragic irony, relate to the audience, use statistical facts, narrarate somebody else's story, just anything, ANYTHING that'll make the audience care, or even remember your flash.

Barely anybody is going to remember this...you didn't really put as much time into it as you should've, and it shows. I'm sorry, but this was a below-mediocre flash...good try, trying to get people to stop smoking pot, but always remember what may not be cool for you may be dandy to others...If you really want people to change, make them want to...and start with a message that captivates.

Better luck next time.

-Phobotech-


05AshallL responds:

lol, the title says , smoking kills (short), and the muic is there for you i ncase u wanna listen, and i was a joke flash , not a really convincing one.(my keyboard is alittle jammy)


nonoyawnsnonoyawns

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Passing this...

not because of the animation, or lack of concept, of unnecessary techno music, but because i agree with the message. If you end up blammed, come back with a better non-smoking vid.


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05AshallL responds:

didnt get blammed, and i must agree i dont know why cuz i only spent half an hour on this lol,