like it!
i like it! nice anim! nice story, too!
Author Comments
WOHOOOOOO! finaly after weeks of work its here! PAML3
ARGH, took me a few weeks to make, spent hours trying to figure out simple mistakes and all that stuff but now its here!
all right this episode is a hell lot better than the other episodes, it has proper length and a proper story. I got three people workin on Paml now, me, Sam and our new scriptwriter Elizabeth (Thats ur name right?) so anyways enjoy!
oh and by the way, have an amazing christmas!!!
assasinrabbit responds:
why thank u :D PAML 4 is commin out soon
Hmmm not bad
Not bad...but try making it a bit smoother and make everything a bit more clearer and try and improve on the animation
assasinrabbit responds:
thats my goal, by each episode the graphics/everything is improvin
o.k
the movie is ok ... the voices could be better , just train on it !
assasinrabbit responds:
thx :D
not bad , not bad
I can see that a fair bit of effort went into this flash , however here is my basic summary:
good:
-descent animation
-alright humor
- potential
not so good:
-the motion tweening at the start was sketchy
-audio was kind of sketchy
over all it was alright imo
assasinrabbit responds:
alright, all the stuff that is bad im trying to improve, thx for the review.
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