Turned out brilliantly.
All the authors synched the action brilliantly to the music and I loved the fast-paced action.
I don't know whether I preferred the fast transitions at the start (specially loved the rainbow-spew) or the fuller humour/narrative towards the end but there wasn't a dull moment and the exclusion of colour turned out brilliantly.
My only slight niggle might be that I'd have preferred a focus on either the surreal transitions of the start or the humour near the end - both brilliant but maybe a focus on one element ould make it stronger? I dunno.