Inspired by Brakenwood...
...A partial take from the series that is well known, but your effort stands overall.
Good work.
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this is a story about a small forest creature named Pit, he just woke up and is hungy but wants meat for breakfast but runs into problems geting it, its my first and its not that good(the begining is crappy but it gets better) i hope u like it
did anyone else notice
the complete bitey of brackenwood rip off?
Jestercap13 responds:
thats the point lots noticed im a big fan its like a tribute (sort a) and its my first and im not that good so i take inspiration from him sorry if it bothered you
A flash movie is like a book, or essay.
You should try to grab the viewer at the beginning of the movie, or else they will become uninterested in the film, nd quit it, like I have. I couldn't tell what was what, due to the art, and the movement was just unbearable. I'm sorry, but I'm being honest, but don't give up! I see potential, and you should continue making movies. But like I said, try to grab the reader at the beginning.
Jestercap13 responds:
thanx ill keep that in mind and ill try again it might be better cya in a few weeks
this is good
it kept slowing down and what not
but all in all
i think is good
for hard work you get a 5/5
Jestercap13 responds:
thanx its my first so it slow from the optimization( im not that good at that yet) and what not but i should have anew one up soon( few weeks lol)
This movie smells of potential
First off, great movie for being your first one. Also.. i can CLEARY see that you took inspiration from the Brackenwood series by Adam Phillips, wich of course is a very good thing in my opinion. The movie itself was kind of random, it was pretty good but a little bit too random. Still, i think you should continue doing in this sort of style, trying to bring out the atmosphere and stuff. I really think you should continue on that type of style, cause i TRULY love Adam Phillips work!
four out of five
eight out of ten
Cheers! / SimMa
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