i agree with hat-man it does need some work..first u need some sound effects and maybe some voice acting?
Well, I did write that in the description. And thanks. You might actually have just inspired me to remake this. Cool! Oh, and read my response to the Hat-Man, ok?
you need alot more practice. Ppl don't get it because your animation was weird. We understand the concept of the game portal. Very stiff.
Sorry. This WAS my first flash ever published, So sorry for being bad at my first try.
And don't ever, EVER, write a bad review unless you can do better. And you still haven't proved your better than even ME.
since its a "first" try..
It was pretty good, but i dont think its what Newground want.
TOO BAD IT LIVES!!!
with a 6/10
The problem with the "let's see you do better" attitude is that it doesn't take a perfume maker to know that shit stinks. and I'm not all that impressed with this, it looks like it was done in pivot.
WTF WAS THAT SHIT.