Very good
liked it alot.
Spelling is just the main problem.
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I made a b-day card for a freind, it was really short notice, I actualy wanted to add the "send to freind" but... couldnt get the actionscript for it and all that crap. This aint a thing I worked on for a long time it took me less than an hour, but still I like to post all of my stuff on newgrounds... enjooy
P.S. for those who care PAML 2 should be commin out after christmas
>.<
...So...no proper grammar or spelling either, eh?
*Blink* I think that's an area of improvement you may wish to look into. ^.^
You even abbreviated "Birthday" Tisk-tisk. Think of the implications in that! Though they're a bit obvious, seeing as you didn't even try to hide it with the "Oh, screw this!" Anyhoo...
I'm Big Brother, and I'm always watching...
assasinrabbit responds:
sorry I just dont like spellin :D thx lol... I had to make this in a short period of time so I didnt really have time for spelcheck... or plot lol :D
funny
I like it
Straight forward and to the point
it could be improved but that might ruin the ending
the quatlity matches the ending
Keep it up
assasinrabbit responds:
lol thx :D this is turning out better than I though
