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http://i48.photobucket.co m/albums/f211/plebs/TORLO L.jpg
Pretty bad BOO.
Firstly, NO BACKGROUNDS! This is a HUGE mistake, you need some variety or change in your backgrounds other then just black.
Second, put a little more detail into your characters. They are all solid colors (Except for Masturbate Man, who was Rainbow) and were fairly dull. Spruce 'em up, put some shading or some details (Pants zipper, pockets, etc.) to make 'em nice.
Thirdly, be funny. That's the only reason any person is going to watch something like this, and your visual humor was lacking. The only joke I saw was a penis joke, and those don't usually work out to well. Don't use them unless they really work.
Lastly, Dragonforce = Suck. You do know those guitar solos are so fast because they speed it up in editing right?
I think you can do good, and this gang might succeed. Keep it up, and put a little more effort in next time.
2/10, and 1/5. Better luck next time.
PS: I still don't understand why I was banned from your site (Loincloth Owl). I wasn't going to post any crap against the SG, It's not a big deal to it. It was Tiki who posted the TOR thing, not me.
lol u r immensely fag
It's nice of you to set me on fire amidst your montage of...abstract art and rainbow penis jokes. I chuckled.
Keep on keepin' on :)
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