The climax could have been a lot better...
But the right choice of a sentimental music and not-too-fancy art design really make up for a good presentation. I wish you should take more time on animating and polishing your artwork. Overall, for a beginner, this is already good enough!
Personally, i hate it. It was totally random and useless. I apologize for being so harsh but i say what i think and see. I'm trying to think about ways you could improve it but i'm my eyes it's hopeless.
This is awful. The art is just rancid. The idea is beyond stupid and you obviously didn't put a lot of time and effort. Worst of all si the pre-pubescent voice making my ears bleed. Ugh. BAD!
But obviously I stated that I put hours upon hours of time into it and loads of effort. Your ears are weird, no one else complained about my voice (which I think is fine, btw). Any actual CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would be nice. (What's wrong with the idea, why do you think I didn't put any time or effort into it, what was wrong with the art, etc)
Glad you liked it.
The beginnign was great, u know... the smooth music, the touchy touchy thing..
But the dude wif the gune juz blew it, man..
Try not to do a violence comedy & maybe u'll success...
The drawing are okay, could be better, tho..
Over all, enough to get my vote of 4
Wow that was touching in the beggining and funny at the end. I would probably fix the voice a little though, but other than that it was still a great flash. Keep it up!