Notbad
Well this was notbad some good art style and characters was simple and funny and a decent story element i liked what you have created here hope to see more
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Back after a very long break, here i am with Ratbag & Furball 5. Pear Pie Pain was my semester project for my Multimedia Certificate IV 2D animation unit. Of course i was planning to also release it on Newgrounds once it was complete, so here it is. My first attempt at making an animation almost entirely FBF (pencil and paper, scanner and vectorising) out of admiration for the toonists who came before all of us. Thanks to family and friends who gave me the thumbs up on bits and pieces when i was still creating the cartoon and of course my teacher for hinting when i'd get stuck on something. The soundtrack used in the second half of the cartoon is made from a jingle originally from the NES game: Circus Charlie. I just made it into an orchestra piece.
hehehe you got better
definitely an improvement here you can tell lol seriously just go watch your first ratbag and furball and compare it to this
one thing i wanna say about it is its like a more pg rated and slightly quicker paced due to its shortness tom and jerry
which is awesome
try upping the antics though and make it longer lol i guarantee good results
this never gets old
dude your movies never get old. i watch them all the time. now that i mention it, its been a long time since i heard from you man
stoners-lunchbox responds:
Thanks, God. But i'm not quite ready to see you yet, i still have another 50-60 years in me.
FBF good, but a wee bit short perhaps?
As previous commenters noted, this may not have been the best script - imo, it was about 20-30 seconds shorter than needed, as the fighting sequence went by very very quickly, and could have used more detail.
Music was good, as usual - graphics, well - the FBF went very well, and you did some nice effects.
I would have given a 7, except you were very obviously restricted by class requirements and old man Tempus Fugit - so I had to allow for that.
I don't think Tom and Jerry would have shared pear pies together at the end of one of their cartoons - but I think it was a bit of a Jonesian ending to have Ratbag and Furball lunch tete a tete - a nice touch to the script, that.
If you didn't cop an "A" for this in class, may Darrell Hair be that teacher's next pupil :)
stoners-lunchbox responds:
LoL, for that piece of information, the cartoon scored a 97% (High Distinction) and is now used at Kangan and Batman TAFE in Broadmeadows as example work. Thanks for the support and i hope i get to make more soon.
HAHAHA
Flour Bazooka HAHAHA very funny.Not bad video.
stoners-lunchbox responds:
Thanks. That was a lazy work-around for the Flour bag "see-saw" catapult, by the way. In hy humble opinion, that would've worked better, but i got lazy so may the gods of work ethics have mercy on my soul.