there was violence, good animation, and a storyline, but the voices could be better, and the humor could be more....humorous. i think you did a good job with the movie itself, but you could try harder to get the right tone in the voice when you say it, and more voices, nice weapons, nice storyline, nice animation, and ok voices. good job, just try harder with the voices.
Wow..it's really all I can say.
Okay, now the fact that you guys are young can explain a lot of the cliches that appeared in this film. That said, it was a good film. I don't know if you have a voice modulator of some sort where you can change your voices, but you might want to think about it. Everyone having the same voice got annoying after a while. Decent movie, though.