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what you need is too actually have somthin thats funny or at least not offensive like your other videos (you said italian plumbers suck dick) you might actually get a bettr score. try sprite animation instead of drawing and mabye you would get more veiws. for an example of a great flash(dont copie it like some of your other submisions) is dumbass luigi. the creator has a batting averadge of 4.36 and thats really good. the other day i got soo mad at one of your flashes that i wrote a new post on my place with a picture of me (mario) and your flash (luigi) y not look at it people.

Please

I think it's better that you didn't do anything. From trying to unsuccessfully rip-off another artist, to making total and utter crap from what I've seen in your submission history, it's time to quit while you're still ahead or in your case: pretty far behind.

If you want my opinion, first start by getting a steady hand at drawing. Once you're decent enough for the viewers to even tell apart the background from the main characters, try cooking up a plot. You know....plot, like in the movies? A story that captivates the audience, key word being C.a.p.t.i.v.a.t.e.

Now if you want to make a parody of another flash series, that's just fiiiine . But remember: parody=funny. If it's not funny, you fail. However, I think you should solve the two previous issues before even considering dabbling into humor.

Hope that helps and I hope to see some improvements in the future.