That's pretty decent.

Needs work

This needs work in the following:
Artwork- Did yo do this with MS paint? Flash drawings are key.
Plot- The movie made no sense
preloader- Needed!

Voices were ok, and so was the smoothness of the flash, but it needs work.

keep trying
2/5

Short

It's a good start. I hope that it makes it through for awhile. It would be a pity if this got blammed since I've seen much worse flashes make it into the portal with higher scores than this one received.

Good Luck

nice

That was great. The first scene lasted to long, but it seems like a great start.