I could tell this was going to be short. Honestly, I'm glad it was. The animation was a little like Egoraptor. I can see why the score is so low. There's just nothing unique about it. It's just a guy eating a robot and a cake.
The voices aren't the worst, I suppose. What was up with the music at the beginning? At least you stated it was made for Newgrounds. Sadly, we're losing popularity. You need to have more jokes.