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THE ENDENS FUNEY
Author Comments
this is my first submission... be nice.
advice is much appreciated
vlad-miroshnikov responds:
thanks
uh yea okey
That was not what I was expecting. I don't think subtitles were needed. There wasnt much dialogue to beginning with and if people can't hear it ( expected deafOs) they are retarded. But since there is the song playing should have been. Oh and I dont think the grey dudes shirt's face should be moving must of be a glitch.
vlad-miroshnikov responds:
hey, thanks for the review
no the shirt is not a glitch. it is ment to act like the charector's face; who along with everyone else, doesnt have one.
and as for the subtitles, i know one or two people that dont understand me when im trying to talk to them, so to be safe i added them in. the subtitles did block off the guys shirt in the doctor scene though... but i was way too lazy and excited to bother with it
Nice job
Hey, you did pretty good! Keep it up. It was pretty nice, although, it's spelled helmets. Keep it up. I liked the humor at the end, although the car ride could have been a little shorter.
vlad-miroshnikov responds:
helmets... realy? i em nod gud et speeling
jk, i can spell better then that. ill be sure to get someone to pruf read everything befor i sumbit my
as for the car ride; i thought of making it shorter, but i wanted it to stop at a sertain part of the song. now im not sure anymore
thanks for the great review! :D
THe voices were HELLA annoying
The story sucked the visuals were hard on the eyes and voices...OH GOD THE VOICES...0/5
vlad-miroshnikov responds:
im sure ill try using a diffrent style on my next submission
and as for the voices... im not an actor, and i was pretty despirat for a recording program that saves on an mp3 file format
as for the story. you iether enjoy the sence of humor, or you dont.
YAY
this was lovely.
i like your art style and the OH MY GOD OH MY GOD and how his shirt kept on lookign around...just great stuff.
vlad-miroshnikov responds:
thank you :D
the shirt is sapoused to act like the his face. becouse he doesnt have one. not to mention anyone else
im glad you cought that