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Just a project i've been working on :D it took me about 5 days to make
Hope you like it!
You just ruined one of my favourite songs.
Do you actually WATCH what you create, or does it come out in some form of bowel movement? Honestly, I don't know. Why oh why do you do these things? Okay, fairness where fairness is due, the FBF was decent, but after that it went massively downhill. Just... Stop.
I LOVE THIS!!!!
Well I didin't really enjoy this submission, it isn't bad by any means, but it isn't great ether. I was looking forward to the submission when it started, and when the line thing went, but it quickly ended, if you had continued that I might have really enjoyed this submission. Sure it's hard to do, but well worth the end result. From what I did see, the various backgrounds and things I saw was random, and creative a plus on any flash in my opinon. Overall though, it just failed to keep my attention and it didin't leave any lasting impression on me. Just another one of those "Meh" Submissions.
wow, if you want to start making flash animation choose some slower, less energetic song and also concentrate more on music feel than on lyrics (you animated: "i got my head checked by a jumbo jet"???) watch A Simple Line 8 on this portal and learn from those guys how to make flash music video
and about extra: if you are not confident about your voice tell someone to do voice acting for you, dont use that voice changing software
for now, i vote 1 because i cant vote less
I liked the Frame by frame Line thing at the start, and it was a shame you didn't carry it on (yes I know it takes a long time, but then the song is only 2 minutes and a bit long). I didn't understand the weird face either. The guitar guy was also OK. A thing to add is a slightly darker tone towards the outlines of things- it helps. The school burning, try making the flames move- it makes it look much more real.
But seriously, parts like where the man pushes the woman looks very irregular- you've just motion tweened it. The bits where no background (white) should have some, I think you'd get away with putting words for one or two sections, but you could have put the words on a T.V.
A good part was during the "Woo-Hoo!", there were only two actions. That part I liked. I think it was too literal (in a bad way) wherwe the person was touching the others hair during the "When I feel heavy metal", maybe you could have a look at the lyrics :) The muffin sections were just a gap filler too. However, I did like the guy slipping- an example of good animation.
A bit I quite liked was when the mouths of the pictures were moving, like in Fonejacker or some Monty Python stuff. I think it ccan be improved on greatly, but then it would be really good.
Tangy Mustard meets Sublo's roommate.
Nobody puts baby in the corner of the house!
Bowser is finally getting married OR IS HE??
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