it froze RIGHT in the second scene with kirby (who might have been there for no reason at all) & luigi (who froze up. that also caused the whole video to suck) & mario (who just looked at luigi like a total idiot) & chain chomp (who appeared right in the middle of the picture to cause the video to get worse).
i indicate this crap whatsoever! F----------------

Woo

So this is where it all started! Seems like yet another VG sprite animational series with a not-so-great plot. Not to be rude, but you really need to think up an original plot, add more variation and try to give the characters defined personalities so that when a battle between life and death appears their life will actualy seem important. :P Keep up the good work!

-cd-

For a movie clip...

This was bad. No story plot, bad animation (if any animation at all). I'll give you kudos for using the real voices of Mario, Luigi and Bowzer... but not much else. a 1.

Needs more motion.

The characters don't move enough. Luigi was completely frozen in a pose that looks like he's moving but isn't, and there was that extended bit where Mario was trying to get his attention by talking, with absolutely nothing on the screen moving. That was annoying. You should have put in at least some "idle" animations, and some other motions, too. Also, if Mario was supposed to be surprised by Kirby's presence, it would have been nice if he was offscreen until Mario noticed him, and the screen scrolled over to him then.

This movie clip is crap

are flash movie clip is not good but the movie was stop and I didn't watch it all are
flash movie. have you watch are movie? well you have to watch and see again
waht to don