Nice!

Well done on making 4th place!

Nice... Very nice!

Not as good as the last episode but voice actors seem to be getting more in character so that's a good sign. Though, P3RFECT, honey, you seemed a bit emotion-confused at times. XD Be careful with that.

Other than that, I swear, I'll say it again, Ryker's voices for the win. XD Too perfect are the choices you made for Ryker.

I can't wait to see episode ten onward dubbed and more animated episode pieces on Lifepoint1. Who knows? I might even join the Lifepoint1 bit eventually... But for now, I'm just humoured from where I stand with the characters I currently voice even if I don't reappear that often.

You animate a lot better than I do... not that, that's saying much but you have some real talent. Put in the time and don't let people make you feel rushed. Once everything is detailed and animated nicely, it'll look exquisite. Be sure to hang onto the original .FLAs though incase eventually you might want to edit the lip syncing or otherwise.

Music for some of the past episodes as well as sound effects had a habit of being so much louder that they'd overpower the voice actors. It looks like you now have that under control. They actually sound a bit more on par and you can understand what everyone is saying.

That's really all I have to say. Well done. Keep 'em coming!

timing

the background could be worked on. and the timing with the lips, needs some serious re synchronizing, finally the story is a bit confusing

its good

but you need to work on the backgrounds then it will look much much much better. If you put the detail into the people then you can do it to the background

too confusing

the animating was a bit too limited (not enough actual frames, just a lot of tweening and/or free transform) and the plot overall was hard to keep up with.