nice one
yea, i liked this a lot. actually laughed out loud. much prefered it to the special school one. but i suppose they're very different creatures.
Author Comments
So this is my second Flash cartoon, and its pretty different to the first. It rained nearly every time I set to work on it, so I don't know - maybe the dismal English winter had an effect...
Anyway, poor Eric. Also, this is the second time I uploaded this - the first time it didn't work; it froze on the intro screen and I've no idea why. but thankyou to all the people who took the time to let me know!
Let me know what you think; its nice getting reviews either way, and as I'm still quite early on in the learning curve, any suggestions or feedback would be appreciated!
This cartoon is also available to download on my website - www.pogscribbles.org
Yes
Very strange, young man. Very strange, yet beguiling; like a mother's breast with a Millwall tatoo on in.
Brilliant!
This was ace, it reminded me a lot of David Firth!
This should be on the front page!
Keep up the good work!
yup, I liked it
I really liked the animation, and the use of the b&w stills (other than Brenda's chin, which looked a little like a sad mouth and was a bit distracting).
Very atmospheric, looking forward to another installment.
I didin't like it.
The first, and cardinal rule that a submission with voice work, or talking must have is submititles, if you don't have subtitles then there is no point in submitting something. I can say though, that the graphics weren't to bad. It showed the things it had to show and it worked well overall. I woulden't call it somthing special, by any means and there really isn't a story or anything, but all in all the submission wasn't horrible. Probebly more in the average range.
Grebn responds:
Hi Dew,
Fair enough.
As for subtitles, I find that if you're listening rather than reading then they're distracting. It would be better to be able to select them from a menu I reckon. I may have to start doing that.