"An evil robot warlord just destroyed the town..."
If there was anything I'd expect a grandmother to EVER say to her grandson, it definetly wouldn't be that. I lost faith at that point. The plot was really bad and generally, the game just didn't provide the excitement it should have. Don't compare this to Zelda until you feel willing to put some real work into it.
Its interesting at first but it gets old I played the first 3 boosses all the same break the monotany different bosses and something interesting like say upgrades or something or another (other than the guns) its just too monotonous.
GIVE IT A TRY
its started out all right but the further you get into it the worse it got.
what happyacorn said.
[It was very intresting at first! But then it slowly went down-hill the furth I got.]
[Grandmas...don't talk that way. You needed something that actually made you feel like you were in the game, ya know? like: "Oh deary, don't go outside today...yada yada" or something like that. It would inform you that there in fact is something about to own you and builds character.]
[Also, the guy was just plain ugly.]
[The reason why most characters in big hits (LIKE ZELDA!) have cute or cool characters is to keep from people gagging everytime they look at it. And also, so people can try and be like that person. Like Link! He's handsome, helps others, and has a way with words! (Lol.)]
[The maps were also poorly designed.]
[Please be proud of your work before you submit it next time