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This is the first game I've ever made it's fairly basic right now may look to upgrade it at some point.

10/17/07: Made some upgrades to make it a little easier also at least attempted to fix the grammer mistakes.

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I like it, but there could be improvements.

Well, first of all, work a bit on your grammar, it would make the purpose of this game a LOT easier to understand for a newbie who is trying it for the first time. And in case you just CAN'T do that, get someone you know to proof-read it for ya!
Secondly, yes, it get's pretty hard pretty quickly, but hey, that's okay, maybe slow the process a liiiiitle bit, but that doesn't matter THAT much.
Next, the powerups stay the same place on the field when you pick them up, which means that any n00b with half a brain and a bit of talent with a mouse could take the file 2 or 3 times, then pick up the slow down or remove obstacles powerup and keep going in a slow pace for the entire game.
That's pretty much it, other than that, I like the game, maybe you should make the field a bit bigger, so that it would allow players to continue for a longer time, but that's up to you!
5/10 stars, good but not TOO good. Kinda average =/

wtf

this isnt good enough to have spam on it.. what up with all this spam

It's ok

but u can just right click, MUST BE FIXED!!

Nice, can be improved

Nice gameplay, but it can be improved. I mean, when you get about 9 files there are way too many explosives and the hourglass is very fast. Also, work in your grammar for the instructions, try not to leave a square edge in the pictures, and try to make it easier.

Good,

but you need better....well, like story or like obstacles and stuff, but otherwise, GREAT.

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Uploaded
Nov 16, 2007
5:22 PM EST