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Of mice and men spoof

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Two cousins, one adventure. This is a school project I did. I made this before I made "What would jesus do?" So it was the last flash I made without color. I wont be putting color on this one. I'm leaving it as is.

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A very promising video

You picked an ambitious topic: a novel everyone reads in high school, with some meaty issues to chew on. You tackled both the comedic and tragic elements of the story. That takes courage to do in a short flash. But that is also why it doesn't really work as a spoof. The minor technical issues are slightly distracting. But the quality of the line drawings and the emotion you show stand out. It came through for me in the voice acting and the rabbit scene. Post more!

Rayos responds:

Thanks, This was one of my first. In the rabbit scene, did you notice the music in the background? That was actually my dad watching Jurassic park 3. Thanks for promising to check out some of my newer stuff! I have a new cartoon called "Clock Tower" I'm working on. I'm almost done...sorta...THANKS! :)

I dislike bad voice overs

I think that you spent some time on this. The lack of background, and the crappy mic make it for a hard to watch flash. There was some bad lip syncing as well.

I had a muffin before I watched this so you will get a 2.

You look like you got some potential because I seen some camera techniques used at the end and some sort of comedic capacity what with the bunny and Japan and stuff.

I'll look out for your new work.

Rayos responds:

I too dislike bad voice overs. YOU SIR, are a muffin eater of the first class. The fact that you'll be seeing them makes me suddenly work harder...tis odd

LOL I just read this for school too>..

needed to be funnier, better animated, and at least some sound

Rayos responds:

It wasnt actually supposed to be funny, it was a school project.

ooooookay then......

A for effort! good take on the story.

Rayos responds:

Thanks UncleSam...Err...chris.

lol, the lip syncing was good

You must of taken a lot of time on the mouth movement, it looks really well. And I like the characters. You should use them in more movies and make them have there own adventures.

Rayos responds:

I actually thought about this myself. :) Great minds think alike eh? ;)

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Nov 12, 2007
4:13 PM EST