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Its my first time making somthing with flash so it's okay to be mean this time. And what I mean by "mean" is critical and what it needs to be better. At least I didn't do anything retarded with sticks.
I got the audio from vgmusic.com
looks copy and pasted....
definitely needs work, the dog disappears for a while then comes back. it looks very boring.
ill give it a 8 because i love pets but still needs a little work and do you own that dog
idk if its a loop
i have no clue if that loops or going into something else i got a bit scared and thought it was a screamer but not bad for your fist time, try some more complicated animation(the flash overall looks good and smooth)
i gave it a five just because i see it being the next "letter b"
gfx are ok
it's ok for an intro to something, but even then, it needs a background, and other than the dog dissapearing for half a second, something needs to happen, there needs to be some kind of a plot, or sequence of events. It doesn't have to be too long, but it has to have a point, or some humor, something that will keep people tuned in.
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