My first flash so please, don't be cruel.
And just if you're wondering. It's a bouquet of Balloons.
-Any tips you can give me would be appreciated! Thank You!-
Pretty good
Good job for a first flash. It's great that you had sound, i recently entered my first also and I got torn apart for not having any, haha. But next time try to give your characters more emotion. Like when the clown pulls up the bouquet of balloons, the guy could have put up his hands and his expression could have changed and he could have slowly backed away.
Why thank you.
Highly surreal
Nice little short though, good use of music and the fact it was devoid of dialogue made it even creepier.
Quality submission.
Empathy, man
Yea, I hate it when clowns hit on me too. lol
Lol
Lol, i liked it, but can i recommend you re--post it with a format change?
The quality is dodgy
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Looks to me like you need to spend more time on your flash animation. . . I think, after watching three times, that the clown was in love with the guy, but turning the clowns eyes into hearts instead of just winking would help... Nice first attempt.