The preview doesnt tell anything about what the story is going to be about, except maybe the weird looking guy is gonna get it chucky style? Other then that, the character himself is pretty good, although you may want to ease your shading, its too strong. Makes it look really unrealistic. But, all in all, with a good plot( which your preview doesnt allude to at all) you could pull it off.
all over the place
You might just want to post an animated GIF of this on your blog rather than submit something this tiny.
you didn't read the comment did you?