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Nov 6, 2007 | 9:40 PM EST

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So this the first flash I ever made. I kind of had a deadline, so I rushed a lot of things, didn't care to fix some stuff, and the drawings were pretty basic... But it was all to get a good idea of flash and all that jazz. What do you think?

edit: everyones telling me about the lack of sound, when I made it, I wasn't allowed to put sound in :/ but I might add some later. sry about that



Rated 0 / 5 stars


WTF!!! i liked that he ws gettin beat up and crap, but the best part about fights is definitely the sound, and there was none!!! plus when it said zzz over his head at the begginin he was still blinkin!!! it has a lot of potential and i hope that if it gets blammed or what ever u will submit it again, but with SOUND!!! but once again it has a lot of potential, but u have to watch the little things such as blinkin when he is supposed to be asleep!! but once again, and for the last time, LOTS OF POTENTIAL HERE!!!

Lizzie616 responds:

i dont understand what you meant by the blinking, while he was sleeping. The thing is, he's asleep but then he's in a dream, where he starts... looking around, but the whole time he's actually asleep. But yeah, I'm going to fix it up and put in some sound because I'm getting flash soon (i used a diff. computer when i made this)

Thanks for the review


Rated 3 / 5 stars


Pretty neat, But it really needs sound. Add it! ;D It'll make it much better.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

not that bad

well it wasnt that bad... i would like sound to it but i guess it was pretty good. i mean i still understood i liked it, it was pretty funny


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


Allways, Allways, ALLWAYS have sound! Unless the storyline, plot or style calls for it, add sound! If there isn't any dialog, or the movie needs some 'oomph,' add a soundtrack to go with it. It just takes a few minutes...


Rated 4 / 5 stars


that was a pretty good animation. my only big problem was there was no sound. i think that really would have added to the whole movie