Nice Job.
It'd be great to see you expand on this and make it a thousand times more spectacular. Perhaps get some outside help to provide the voices for you?
I really enjoyed the beginning parts of it. So hurry up and make some more stuff.
Author Comments
I have been working on this for the past three weeks. It is my first proper flash movie, and the start of a short series I have been planning for a while. If I had my way I would have started it when I felt that I could draw better than I currently do, but college pressed me into making an animation, and having no better ideas I started work on this.
It was originally meant to be much longer, but being pressed for time meant I had to shunt most of the action into the next episode in my plans. I intend to get some feedback from Newgrounds to put into my evaluation, so please feel free to make any points about the movie, good or bad, the more, the better!
Good
Your animation is pretty good, but you might want to try spending more time on it. It was glaringly obvious that you took short cuts, like using the paintbrush tool a lot, using the blur effect, and a lot of loops. It took away from what had the potential to be a greater flash movie.
TheHeavy responds:
Time limit is the bane of any animation. Fair points though, and I will take them into account next time. Apart from maybe the comment about the paintbrush... I used lines through most of it.
great prolouge
it seems like a great way to start a series. i rated it so high 'cause i want to see the rest (which is really the point of a prolauge. Decent animation, but i would go for more styleized fight scenes.
TheHeavy responds:
What fight scenes? :p
Boring
The animation is decent, but the plot takes too long to reach. I couldn't finish watching it. Try reaching the climax quicker, it is a flash animation after all.
TheHeavy responds:
Thanks for your comment. Fair point about it being slow though, I intend to spend a lot longer making the next episode, including pacing.