I like it brill idea

I like the concept very corny but you use the line drawing tool a bit too much try the paint brush or add shading it will make it look better :)

The Animated Soap-Opera!!!

It´s more fun when the characters are cartoons. I´d really love to see a series of this kind in Newgrounds... Why don´t you try to make an animation bank and make a weekly series?

YAY!

I really adore this animation, and I know you've put a lot of hard work into creating this! Great Job and I look forward to seeing more of your Animations :)

awsome..but

still need to work on animating...the characters motion is to FLASH like and not anime like, I can see full well what you where trying to show. and some face expresions came out really well. like the part when that girl was sitting down in the change room upset and her nees up by her head.

keep at it though. This will turn out into a good series. just don't make it bold and the beutiful like