ahh the bugs

well levi, the sound was all over the place the story was a little hard to to follow. maybe I need to read the beginning again, I don't know. I hate to read shit. other then that I think your on to something with this just rewrite it so a 6 yr old can understand whats going on.

lol wtf?

it has a few bugs but i thought it was pretty funny lol
choclate cake lol

fix the bugs (the sound track at the start)

Here's what the critics had to say about it:

Gene Shalit- "I loved it!"

Roger Ebert- "Mmm... chocolate cake."

Leonard Maltin- "Hey you, get the f**k out of my house!"

Richard Roper- "For the last time, I'm NOT Howie Long."

Kevin Maynard- "You know who I am?"

Gene Siskel- "I'm dead."

The Jamoke- "Shatner's best performance ever."

5/5, 10/10.

OMG

WTF, that was totally random, I lol'd.