Short and simple
Yep, it is short and simple. I like that. You also don't even attempt to do voices until that one scene. Which was kind of cool to watch it blend.
Anyway, the comedy was pretty nice. had a lot of it and it was in fact funny. I cracked up at the...boo,kirby...Thing.
Your character descriptions were kind of funny. "The girlfriend" No name at all. You know, I do that kind of thing. "So....what is her name" "I don't know....Well, instead of coming up with a proper name, let us play eye spy or some shit." "I don't like eye spy" "Ok then, her name is officially. Whiny girl." ya....I do have some fun.
As for the father. You can't be cool headed and freak out at bad things...Cool headed describes someone who doesn't have a "Berserk button" As in. Someone who literally isn't effected by most things. I could be considered cool headed. Someone who doesn't react could be considered cool headed. Someone who doesn't really freak out about good things, but does bad things. Is just someone who doesn't really get excited.
Thought it was great. Great twist on a classic. Cant wait for more (that im guessing are going to come based on the number in the tile) Gonna look forward to the next ones.
I really like the animations, but you may want to think about working on the story progression a little. also, try to make it either all voice or all text, dont switch back and forth.
The voice clips was originally planned out as the way it is now, which is to emphasize the "loudness" of some of the dialogue.