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Well, here we go, the 2nd part of our two people collaboration, I hope you all like it, leave a comment
I´ve seen quite a lot of NOObNation flashes and I always thought they were pretty good compared to a whole lot of other groups you see on NG. This collab was alright too, although it wasn´t as good as what I´ve seen from NN till now.
iShirm´s flash was a pretty good one imo. The drawings were decent and the "English motherfucker"-joke in the end made me smile. There wasn´t much too improve there. I just think the background could´ve been drawn a little better. Also the location didn´t made much sense, but that´s okay since the whole movie didn´t made much sense anyway.
Little-Rena´s flash: Well I dunno about that one. I didn´t really saw the joke, if there was any. Also, the pumpkin seemed more like some sort of fruit and the background didn´t look that good either. The popping sound when the eyes appeared was kinda funny though.
Overall 6 out of 10, 3 out of 5. I agree with what milinko and Coop said earlier, you should get a few more people to join the collab. You only have two short flashes now and they weren´t great or anything, just nice.
~Auz, Review Request Club
ok we will work on the people problem then :P thanks for the review :D
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Alright, that was a pretty enjoyable collab, I think. iShirm's part was pretty funny, seeing how I wasn't expecting that buy to come out at all. That made me laugh. I guess Rena's part was pretty comical too. Not sure if you are some kind of pumpkin rights activist or something, but it's still a funny spin.
Only thing I really didn't like was the fact that there were only two parts to this. Should have gotten some more of the NN to join in on this one. Another thing, the menu was kind of hard to read.
there were only two part because its called ishirm&rena :D but we will have some special guests in the further episodes :P thanks for the review ;)
Worth a look
I've watched both parts and will deliver verdicts on both below:
iShirm - I didn't understand the language of the pumpkin song, but I would definately have preferred the pumpkin to remain the same size, with the mouth changing size - stretching it just didn't seem to work. Samuel L. Jackson was a bit of a shock, as he bludgeoned the skit to death.
Little-Rena - I thought the Pumpkin was cute. Though it could have done with a mouth (and maybe a bow on its head :P) I'm not sure about the way it died, in the shower of colour, but that's the only real gripe I have.
Maybe grab a few more buddies and make some extra parts, to improve the longevity of the piece, but other than that, you're on the right track.
[Review Request Club]
Oh man that was long :P thanks for this great review, make sure you'll see the third part it'll surely be better :D
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