good..
great but a little too short and lack of frames but obverall i rly liked it 5/5
Author Comments
Holy fuck, i was 14 when i did this... it's cool to watch old stuff - when it's not embarrassing
Joeyag responds:
yeah, it is short, but next time I'll make a longer animation!
thanks for the review!!
a little short
nice animation. you need to work on the frame work a little.
Joeyag responds:
All right, thanks!
Great Work
For a first time submission. Wow! :0)
Good job. It was short, but I really liked the skywork. The moon was really beautiful.
Keep up the great work.
:0)
Joeyag responds:
yes, it is short, but I think it was hard to make a longer, because I had to submit it soon..
about the moon, it is the same moon from the preloader, but the stars are all mine !
thanks of the reiew!
Not quite...
I wouldn't say this is good enough for NG, for much the same reason as many other sub-NG material. It needs to be longer, and have more story to it. What you have is a nice intro, but you need a main sotry or something for people to watch and get into. The music was nice, and the animation you did do was certainly passable. There just needs to be more of it.
Joeyag responds:
well, it is just my first animation, I will make more, thanks!
not bad
i'm impressed, this was pretty good for your first time needs to be longer though. you also need to iron out a few jerky bits. i enjoyed it.
Joeyag responds:
yeah, the next will be longer, thanks!
