It was OK

It had it's good parts, but the dialogue was waaaaaay to far apart. If anyone actually had a conversation like that they would go insane. So just work on the dialogue.

I also noticed that they never walked, they either just stood there, or in bigfoot's case, dropped from the ceiling. Good job, though! Looking forward to the rest of the series!

a little faster moving

it got much better towards the middle and end, but you could make the beginning move more quickly. overall good, though.

a little work and it will be a 10 star

im going to give u an 8 coz it was prity well dun. just a bit slow in sum places but if u had sum back ground music that would of helped heaps. i loved the hat part lmao. felt like i was watching a kids show or sumthing lmao

Wow...

This was funny...shorten the pauses and work a little with the details and this will be good lol "Who wants candy?"

Very nice!

This is great! Some of the pauses were a little too long, but other than that I really liked it. I'M READY BURGER!