Hey, not bad if this is your 1st try...
It does show that you have a lot of creativity, and can try different things in your flash animations. Other things will come with experience, such as getting better FPS, smoother animations and transitions. Also, don't be afraid to do some original artwork - in the beginning, we all copy other ideas just to get started, but the mark of a great flash animation is original thought.
Keep practicing - I think you'll be putting out some real quality work in a few years. You have the raw talent - it just needs to be fine tuned.
it was ok
some of it was pretty good for a first try, anims could have been smoother though
it wouldve gotten 9 if it werent for the crappy graphics
The animation could have been smoother.
Not Flash >_>
You did this in Windows Movie Maker and Paint didn't you?
nope in macormedia flash player 8 i sawre to god i did