The first thing I must say is the cursor is annoying for the main flash part, a smaller one would have been better and the menu could do with a little work, though it does do it's job. As for the main flash itself, some of the animation is okay and other bits a little jerky, some pretty decent graphics and story.
The voice acting is pretty good too, although some of it is a little crackly, so that could be worked on and the parts where text shows is too fast, fade it out at times maybe. Overall though, a pretty decent flash, it's the story that counts more than anything.
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Thanks for the review.
I loved it
A really nice movie, good script, only a few minor things away from a classic.
THe graphics were good, well drawn characters, with just a few animation niggles. I found that the main characters arms weren't up to scratch, and some of the tweenie was a little shoddy, but it was mainly good.
The souns was really good, voice acting was excellent, even if there was a few times where my ears nearly bled from the sudden volume increases.
Overall the story was really good, some of the jokes were a bit lame, but most were excellent, I really liked the cameoes, and they were quite well dawn.
This is a really good movie, and a great job
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Thanks for the review,
And I am glad you didn't sue me due to ear injuries and I'll work on the jokes.
It's not bad
Script is pretty good, it's not hilarious, but it's funny.
Graphics are somewhat decent, although a little basic, still, good.
Voice acting was also pretty good.
The reference to newgrounds related characters was great, sort of like an inside joke... I can't see too many people going trick or treating as steve IRL, so that just makes the joke a bit over-the top. I liked that.
The audio was a bit fuzzy at times, so it could have been a lot cleaner.
Jokes could have been funnier, they weren't very subtle, so there's some room for improvement there, but it's better than most.
Graphics are passable, but there is definite room for improvement, the animation isn't quite the slick, smooth animation you see in tankmen or other well animated cartoons, but it's not too far off.
It's a very decent flash, it's not amazing, but it's definitely something to be proud of.
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Thanks, I'll keep those in mind.
It's ok, yet sometimes lazy parts in the flash
Nice halloween flash, and also reasonably funny, let's sum things up!
+ Nice characters
+ Difference in voices
- Sometimes you spent too little time on some things (like the robot arms putting the Detective Grimoire suit on, or the part with "Can't Touch This")
- Spelling mistakes
- Some jokes weren't funny (like the 4AM one)
Overall: Nice halloween themed flash, yet some parts didn't have enough work to it (like the subtitles or certain parts).
You didn't like the 4am one...I kinda liked it, anyways I'll spend more time on the less important things in animation to improve the overall quality.
Thanks for the review
4/5 and 9/10
- Good stuff -
I liked the custom cursour because most people never bother to put them in flash movies, most custom cursours are in flash games. Great range of cameos from aother flashes. The VA was pretty cool especially with the cameos. The li-synching was very good and went along very well with th characters. Good to see a scene selection because the flash had alot of length to it.
- Bad stuff and improvments -
In some parts the VA was a bit heavy and there was short buzzes. Also the lip-synching was tiny bit bad when it came to Tankman, because you must of used the mouths from the dress-ups so maybe you could of made some more mouth shapes to make the lip-synching go better with Tankman.
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Ok thanks for the review, I'll use more variety of mouth shapes instead of using the same one mouth shape for each character. I'll keep that in mind.