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Mouse Eating Popcorn

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I've put a lot of work into this one actually. I love this little guy, he's really adorable, and I like how the final product turned out.

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Meh.

I'm not gonna do much review and jump straight into constructive critcism.

Firstly, the mouse looked wonky. Particularly the tail. It looked like a leaf glued to its butt, and the waving was distracting. I understand that this was meant to be cartoony, but it wouldn't hurt to study a video of a mouse moving up to something and eating it, just to get the motions down. Secondly, the eating animation seemed a little unnatural. I'm probably a little demanding here, especially because you're a beginner, but generally, the shorter an animation is, the higher quality it requires for a good rating.

Like the animtion (very Disney)

It showed that you spent time on the animation and character emotions and gestures. (This showed that the character was the most important part and the interaction with the popcorn) When I see this cartoon it reminds me of Disney characters. Good job and make more cartoons. Try to add music if you don't want to add sound affect or talking. Music changes would help like Tom and Jerry Cartoons.

Desperate

Mildly entertaining. I can see that you were desperate. You also spent way too much time on this. And without sound, too.

Probably gonna get Blammed...

But I liked it. Good work :)

Cute mouse

Its short, but well drawn and animated. Sound would have been nice though

Credits & Info

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2,853
Faves:
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Votes
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Score
3.45 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 26, 2007
7:47 PM EDT