This was good. Just, the intro was extremely crap and I thought the whole flash would've been crap. Make a new intro for yourself.
Art throughout the movie was good. Lipsync was pretty good, could've had more eye and eyebrow movement. Voices, need work. To make the quality of the sound the same as the real sound inside the Flash, go to File > Publish Settings > Flash > Flash Stream settings and untick the box that says "convert stereo to mono" and change it to 112kbps.
Loved the end and concept. Good work.