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^^Good Points^^
Very good graphics. You shaded everything in a unique way, but it still looked good, and your drawings were life like. The ending was kind of funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you should have added sound effects or at least some voice overs to help you out. Without any sound at all movies are just really boring. This would have done better as a comic strip or something.

wow that really sucked

well it was funny and appropriate but you basicly did what the guy on the screen was doin, not makin anything worthwhile, take a month or two and come back with a movie I and everybody else on newgrounds will watch , maybe even a game.

Pretty good.

This was kind of short, but it was still good. You don't see things on Newgrounds that are clean enough for kids to watch. This needs some sound though. Maybe some background music to let me know that my speakers still work. Keep up the good work.

Too short although..

The graphics were good the style was really bad i mean it wasnt funny when you make something that is meant to be funny make sure you know it is funny before you submit it in to the portal ok

Uhhh...... Sound.....

damn i was hoping for sound i cant read... lol good job but it needs sound